Freya Pickard has invented a poetic structure she calls Freyan Verse:
Freyan Verse consists of 5 stanzas, each containing 7 lines. The seventh line of verses two and four overlap with line one of verses three and five. … Lines one and seven of each verse contain just one word. Each poem is designed to be read both vertically and horizontally. You can read each verse separately, and, you can also read the poem as a whole.
Being very much a fan of unusual poetic forms, I thought I’d give it a try myself…
passion | love | |
fruit of the living | a transcendent consciousness | |
an ephemeral delight | of the world’s spectacular mystery | |
too swift consumed | drink | kiss by kiss |
and all the more treasured | perilous perfection | its infinitely varied tastes |
nectar of the jealous heart | the scarlet that stains the soul is | divine and wasted on mortal |
blood | is | life |
a tear spilled from the vein | is exquisite in the anticipation! | gift of time in excess |
rivulet of pleasure raw | yet bountiful in regret; accursed | gift of eternity |
tantalising; intoxicating | elixir | robbing the years of meaning |
oh! the naked neck | stripping the days of vitality | |
incites a cruel and terrible | existence is constant | |
lust | death |
this is brilliant Frank! I love it! (will re-blog it on Clippings on Friday…) xxx
Cool! So happy you like it… 🙂
Reblogged this on Dragonscale Clippings and commented:
following my launch earlier this week of my very own poetic form, Freyan Verse, Frank has produced his own poem – I love it! what do you think?